|
The central theme is, in fact, interesting and by developing it suitably the novel could've succeeded. |
|
This novel fails to satisfy because the main theme which incidentally could be quite interesting is not properly developed. |
|
The novel's central theme, though adequately developed fails to hold the attention of the reader. |
|
This novel fails because the main theme which is in fact extremely interesting has not been adequately developed. |
|
As the main theme has not been satisfactorily developed the novel cannot hold one's interest for long. |